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白桦(外2首)
艾哈迈德·阿拜
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PostPosted: 2009-03-10 21:26:19    Post subject: 白桦(外2首) Reply with quote

白 桦(外2首)

艾哈迈德·阿拜

美丽的乔木。

但是少女们不过桥
她们要坐桦皮船

于是 我看到
被江水浸洗过的
 白桦的皮肤
  那么细腻 
   柔嫩
   ……
   ……

   海

鱼的梭子
船只的纺织机
织着大海这匹布

做成衣服了吗?

我们游上岸
身上只结了一层
看不见的盐

哦 这决不是
皇帝的新衣!

   雪 梨

我们看见梨肉的
颜色雪一样白

而真正的雪
会变成水
纯洁 柔软
从梨树下缓缓流过

啊 梨花飘飘洒洒
梨园里的少女
一树树蝴蝶和她舞蹈

艾哈迈德·阿拜,回族,原名于犁。通讯处:大连市甘井子区
西南路1号新华绿洲8—3—3—2号于犁收
邮编:116021 电话:0411—86713077 
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韩少君
进士出身


Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2009-03-10 21:32:41    Post subject: bucuo Reply with quote

不错的诗歌。
个人想法:

哦 这决不是
皇帝的新衣

不要也可!
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