一壶枫雨
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 Posted: 2009-03-08 05:00:59 Post subject: 原创·【仙吕·太常吟】《江城别故人》 |
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望江楼上望江天，魂系白云边。迢迢星水岸，走累了如黛青山。 一壶别酒，一夕风雨，一宿抚琴弦。此去再相见，更不知那月那年？
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2009-03-08 14:44:07 Post subject: |
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畅抒依依惜别之情.
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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诸金龙
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Joined: 25 Sep 2008
Posts: 11
Location: 中国·江苏·南京
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| Posted: 2009-03-08 23:34:41 Post subject: |
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好一个“迢迢星水岸，走累了如黛青山”在下欣赏！
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又一方天
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Joined: 16 Nov 2006
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| Posted: 2009-03-09 03:52:06 Post subject: |
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望江楼上望江天，魂系白云边。
迢迢星水岸，走累了如黛青山。
一壶别酒，一夕风雨，一宿抚琴弦。
此去再相见，更不知那月那年？ |
钻石之作。枫酒兄台与枫有缘，上了《桦林红枫》，又莅临《北美枫》！握！ 
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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| Posted: 2009-03-10 05:39:40 Post subject: |
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好一首仙吕元曲,离情别绪跃然纸上!
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