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满庭芳 秋怨
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PostPosted: 2007-03-13 08:38:12    Post subject: 满庭芳 秋怨 Reply with quote

满庭芳


碧洗长空,云天雁过,谁画远山屏。

笔炼毫光,水绿共苍穹。

时竞流年往事,凭远眺、无序纷纷。

关山外,惊鸿回首,犹见旧书痕。

知那,远人心,何般情事?猜度难分。

空自望神京,娉娉盈盈。

伊人时也顾否?曾记取、可叹飘零。

默然处,暗自心伤,不觉已秋深。

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PostPosted: 2007-03-18 19:20:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

好伤感的字句。意境好。格律可再推敲:)
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