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【墨林简约诗】自责

墨林
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Joined: 16 Sep 2007
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Posted: 2009-03-07 03:40:38 Post subject: 【墨林简约诗】自责

【墨林简约诗】自责许多事情就这样被岸惦记着正如雨滴站成了海我知道船可以歇息而时间却没有锚礁石依旧被风浪雕刻着信念从刀痕里渗出血不肯入睡在沉没的地方自责一次失误我浑然不知沙砾是海的文字常常在它的脊背或胸脯上涂鸦正南巴北的忽略了海的眼神 http://blog.sina.com.cn/dmdqw _________________ 诗歌是不朽的人性之美的灵光;诗歌是人类最纯粹的精神家园。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/dmdqw http://blog.bandao.cn/archive/8025/

金金
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Posted: 2009-03-07 19:41:01 Post subject:

想法不错，语言需精练，意思不够清晰。这已经不错了！问好。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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