齐遂林
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雁自衡阳未归，春已枝头闹。最盼望、上元明月，当空一轮妖娆。品元宵、老少艳妆，花灯儿满城奔跑。乡下也沸腾，狮舞千家欢笑。
情侣牵手，车马粼粼，塞满十里道。龙亭湖、翻红叠翠，画舫轻舟劲摇。仙乐起、随波弥漫，抚琴人、影踪渺渺。孔明灯、冲上薄云，吉时将到。
兴奋此刻，火树腾飞，携银花普照。未喝彩，流弹激发，直逼蟾宫，忽又散作，万千鸥鸟。至惊魂处，霓虹扑面，竟惹得起伏惊叫。叹缤纷、堪比女儿俏！低头抹泪，响箭声声悦耳，心也不觉醉了。
几番留恋，终是还去，沿街赏灯潮。金牛年、艺人聪慧，百变造型，夸张渲染，那对犄角。垂髫顽童，缝里穿梭，乐颠颠哞哞蹦跳。浑不觉、雄鸡已报晓。此番汴梁胜境，古人若知，觅还魂药。
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2009-02-10 21:32:31 Post subject: |
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忭梁胜景闹元宵,怎一个"闹"字了得!
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2009-02-11 06:10:43 Post subject: |
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把"莺啼序"长词写得欢情叠起,乐景重重,再展汴梁胜境! 未明:何以佳节胜景却又用"低头抹泪""心也不觉醉"之语呢?
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齐遂林
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| Posted: 2009-02-12 17:54:35 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
| 忭梁胜景闹元宵,怎一个"闹"字了得! |
谢谢先生，祝快乐！ |
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齐遂林
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| Posted: 2009-02-12 17:56:56 Post subject: |
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| 白云闲人 wrote: |
| 把"莺啼序"长词写得欢情叠起,乐景重重,再展汴梁胜境! 未明:何以佳节胜景却又用"低头抹泪""心也不觉醉"之语呢? |
答先生：喜极而泣，沉醉其间。问好！ |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2009-02-13 05:40:13 Post subject: |
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谢谢释译! 问好!
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又一方天
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| Posted: 2009-03-01 18:15:57 Post subject: |
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齐先生文笔，却胜人一筹！赞叹中......
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