是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2009-02-11 13:35:45 Post subject: 浣 纱 溪 |
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浣纱的人去了
不知经过了多少个季节的变换
惊见的人儿
至今依然未还
痴迷的人
为什么还要来到这小溪边
溪水里花影重重
梦中的西施是不是躲在里面
云去雾散
只有影子在水底与自己默默地对看
风声过耳
似乎还带着溪水的轻叹 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
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Posted: 2009-02-12 19:34:10 Post subject: 好缠绵呀~~~ |
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 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-15 09:55:02 Post subject: |
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有缘兄这首好,韵脚有了变化。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2009-02-24 16:05:26 Post subject: |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2009-02-24 16:07:41 Post subject: |
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| 詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
| 有缘兄这首好,韵脚有了变化。 |
哦,继续努力。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-27 14:16:30 Post subject: 继续牛! |
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| 诗盗喜裸评 wrote: |
| 有缘兄这首好,韵脚有了变化。 |
哦,继续努力。 |
_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2009-03-04 09:52:44 Post subject: |
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| 好痴迷 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2009-03-04 19:04:41 Post subject: |
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| 詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
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| 诗盗喜裸评 wrote: |
| 有缘兄这首好,韵脚有了变化。 |
哦,继续努力。 |
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萧条了,牛怎么那么容易变成了熊。 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2009-03-04 19:06:18 Post subject: |
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迷倒了水里的影子。 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2009-03-05 06:35:54 Post subject: 那影子就站起来了? |
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