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《元宵节之后》外一
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PostPosted: 2009-02-20 20:45:35    Post subject: 《元宵节之后》外一 Reply with quote

《元宵节之后》

烟花早已落下
孔明灯也朝着要去的方向。
独留燃烧后灰烬的余热
夜夜温煮一个人的梦。

梦里,现实是另一种虚境:
小屋逼仄,空气稀薄。
游蛇,死鱼,口吐泡沫的螃蟹。
不能扶乩的远方,三更惊醒
又陷入另一种梦魇……

景象光明的梦境是:
孔明灯像控制自如的飞机
缓缓降落你的窗前。
犹如感应,你临窗凝视,
若有所思。你的泪水被清晰照亮。
一张清瘦透明的脸。

枕头上有泪滴落
一珠紧催一珠
从微合的眼角消失入枕巾。
蜷侧床上的,不是站着的那个。
他们面孔相似,泪流满面。

你是否另一个我?
你我是否血溶于水?
我固执将你隔绝于世
只为梦能更纯,更久,更唯一。
对爱着的一切多么贪婪
我的忏悔不能统治我的坚持。

如何才能持久膨胀的热情?
如何不被吹落赋予的美好?
这被梦想点燃的头颅
这经历黑暗漫长飞行的心灯
该怎样呵护,才不油尽灯枯?



《倾听》
______观麦克尔和乔安娜之舞有感


暗夜的钟声敲响
送来你清脆的脚步声:
“哒,哒,哒,哒......”
如你屈指敲门,
如海门打开,潮水滚涌。

两条脱去胄甲的鱼,
耳鬓厮磨。在海底
头连着头,鳍尾连着鳍尾
将浪花翻卷上岸,
将缠绵演绎到——非常。
它们用身体
协奏一曲缠绵的伦巴:
“是的...不行...也许可以...”

古老的音乐声中,幽暗的海底
我听到了它们最原始的心跳
“噗通,噗通......”
多么简洁,有力。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-20 23:52:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言干净,味道不错,欣赏,问好半溪明月!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 02:03:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

愿你好心情. Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 23:39:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好明月——更喜欢第二首!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 08:21:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

舞蹈和诗歌是相通的~
从你的诗歌中想象得到舞蹈者痴迷沉醉的激情和热烈~~

问好~
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 12:16:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

古老的音乐声中,幽暗的海底
我听到了它们最原始的心跳
“噗通,噗通......”
多么简洁,有力。

一起聆听诗歌的形象演绎!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 05:05:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

一并问好大家~
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 00:03:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗!欣赏并问候!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 23:37:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏,问好明月!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-25 01:58:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

看图画觉得很清新~~~
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PostPosted: 2009-02-25 14:10:52    Post subject: 明月 Reply with quote

明月诗歌的题材很宽泛,学习。
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