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造型
博弈
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PostPosted: 2009-02-12 12:32:17    Post subject: 造型 Reply with quote

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珍有
意偕子
媳陳致中、
黃睿靚在二月十五
前從台北寶徠花園豪宅搬到高
雄市鼓山區美術館特區的人文首璽豪宅居住,新
家位在十五樓兩間,共約一百
卅多坪,裝潢已經
進入最後收
尾工作
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PostPosted: 2009-02-12 18:53:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

当人性丑陋无可挽救时,制度,政策的区别显得无所谓。这一家子啊。。。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-13 00:21:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy 是不是像个古代的兵器?
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PostPosted: 2009-02-13 10:56:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

很高興知道你的讀法. 這也是詩有趣的地方.

貼幾個別的回帖內容;

"1.

首詩
我推想是
您閱讀報紙時
的情緒波動或速率以及
面對平板的資訊用詩之呈現

2.
這樣的造型對談,很有意思!
所謂社會詩或政治詩
又多了一種
造型
"

我回覆;

"的確, 就拿了一段新聞來切割.

謝謝回覆的興趣, 對數學敏感的若將每行字數算算, 1,1,2,3,5,8,13,21
可以得知這是Fibonacci 數列. 越到後面, 建築比例越達'黃金分割'
的比率, 費氏螺旋也是趨近'黃金螺旋'的.

分割不容易啊, 黃金又如何?
政治螺旋前進, 也挺費事. Wink"


"3.
數學是精確而和諧的,政治卻是紛亂而難辨真偽的。這樣對立的觀念相互激盪,確實引人深思……

「造型」是有趣的詩題選擇。也許演員和觀眾都太明白造型的表面性和暫時性,以致於大家都習以為常,甚至看得樂此不疲了。"

我再回覆;

"造形二字讀到我心裡去了.
造形二字, 我原想了幾個, 後來決定就用'造形'
最簡單, 也最給這兩字添加新的意義. 不是拜陳,吳等事,
這詩還難寫! 這樣的取材, 言之有物, 資訊充足, 既有外延,
又有意涵, 又創造新意, 且不用意象. 我想, 不具意象而成詩,
是一件不易的事, 這也是我一直追求的探討之一."
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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 09:45:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

有英文老师说, 散文分行就是诗.

黄金分割更是诗歌了 Razz
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PostPosted: 2009-02-20 15:49:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个可比我那个“高”太多了。

造型看起来像艾菲尔铁塔。
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