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三弦儿微型诗六章春风得意

三弦儿
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Joined: 10 Oct 2008
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Posted: 2009-02-16 20:30:41 Post subject: 三弦儿微型诗六章春风得意

春风得意一夜暗度偷得春心在迎春枝头绽放春意一池春水皱在心头漾在脸上春夜守着梅花品诗春风三千里绿上心头寂寞不是刻意是心在海底的破碎山绿色的旗帜总在召唤水一生的温柔也有断流的时候 _________________ zhchsh365@163.com http://q.sina.com.cn/xyjss

安红红
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Posted: 2009-02-17 05:40:47 Post subject:

水一生的温柔也有断流的时候好短句～另外：排版可以更好些。以便于阅读《春风得意》一夜暗度偷得春心在迎春枝头绽放《春意》一池春水皱在心头漾在脸上《春夜》守着梅花品诗春风三千里绿上心头《寂寞》不是刻意是心在海底的破碎《山》绿色的旗帜总在召唤《水》一生的温柔也有断流的时候 _________________ 多写～ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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