是有缘
秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008
Posts: 741
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薄雾移山气，红霞淡紫烟。
风吹波绿水，浪击浊蓝天。
举首迎新月，思人忆旧年。
疑君藏影后，幻尔到身前。
杜宇啼谁苦，寒光照己怜。
心头方寸地，寂寞好耕田。 |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2009-02-09 07:30:00 Post subject: |
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| 缘情取象，情景交融。 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2009-02-09 08:35:49 Post subject: |
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举首迎新月，思人忆旧年。
迎月思人。 |
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是有缘
秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008
Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
| Posted: 2009-02-11 14:36:38 Post subject: |
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谢冰清老师雅赏。 |
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是有缘
秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008
Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
| Posted: 2009-02-11 14:38:17 Post subject: |
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举首迎新月，思人忆旧年。
迎月思人。 |
谢谢庆宏兄赏读。问好！ |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2009-02-11 17:45:19 Post subject: |
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向晚思人.心宇天宽.
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2009-02-11 18:06:25 Post subject: |
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心头方寸地，寂寞好耕田
形象生动 |
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老山
秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007
Posts: 319
老山Collection |
| Posted: 2009-02-12 00:21:51 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏，特别是“移”“淡”“波”“浊”四字用得好，把景写活了。 |
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野航
秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 547
Location: toronto
野航Collection |
| Posted: 2009-02-12 15:09:04 Post subject: |
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心头方寸地，寂寞好耕田。
读之一痛.实为好句.
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2009-02-13 05:49:47 Post subject: |
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睹物思人: 迎新月,忆旧年;
萦绕情深: 疑君藏影后,幻尔到身前;
婉雅灵动: 心头方寸地,寂寞好耕田.
妙!!!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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