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春天的感觉

闲雅
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Posted: 2007-01-15 08:09:53 Post subject: 春天的感觉

春天的感觉我喜欢春天的感觉那是午后在明媚的春光里让暖暖的阳光懒懒地照在身上的感觉我躺在青青的草地上看色彩斑斓的风筝富有生命地在蓝天里上下轻舞飞扬放飞了多少天真的梦想微风吹过送来嫩绿的杨柳温柔的细语还有鸟儿的欢笑那是我童年的欢乐时光浸透了故乡的醉人芳香我喜欢找回春天的感觉在阳光的午后放飞一只竹编的风筝在和煦的春风里在油菜花盛开的金色田野上再一次放飞童年的天真梦想再一次回到童年的欢乐时光 (2007年1月12日) _________________ 闲情只自谴雅趣向谁言

nobody
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Posted: 2007-01-15 12:05:38 Post subject:

很流畅。要知足呀。至少还有“童年的欢乐时光“ that 你想梦回，看看“今天晚上可真冷“，那个童年，你肯定不想回。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-01-15 19:32:50 Post subject:

欢快 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

闲雅
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Posted: 2007-01-15 20:05:47 Post subject:

谢谢楼上二位的评价，是的，要知足，知足常乐嘛。在现实的生活中，找到春天的感觉。 _________________ 闲情只自谴雅趣向谁言

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Posted: 2007-01-15 20:15:22 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-01-15 20:25:17 Post subject:

_________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-01-15 20:58:13 Post subject:

TORONTO已下雪, Ottawa想必也冰天雪地了吧. 楼主还能写春, 好心境.

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Posted: 2007-01-16 10:12:24 Post subject:

守望精神花园，心有所属。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

闲雅
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Posted: 2007-01-16 11:17:34 Post subject:

感谢hepingdao的春天图片. Ottawa今天零下１５度，可是冷冷的冰雪不能冻结我满腔的热泪凌冽的寒风不能吹散我心中的彩云正如维鹿延所言: 守望精神花园，心有所属。 _________________ 闲情只自谴雅趣向谁言

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