彤欣
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Joined: 09 Feb 2009
Posts: 32
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 Posted: 2009-02-13 18:42:29 Post subject: 爱之花 |
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爱之花
文/彤欣
风展开羽翼
载着我落入
你的世界
蘸着黎明的露珠
轻轻擦去
你脸上的浮尘
娇柔的面颊
如水的秋波
迷醉的激情
填满我
爱的心窝
絮絮讲述
恪守千年的情话
我知道
为你播种的诗行
定能擦亮你的芳香！ |
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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2009-02-13 22:47:17 Post subject: |
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为你播种的诗行
定能擦亮你的芳香！
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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彤欣
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Posts: 32
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| Posted: 2009-02-14 00:29:18 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢楼上！多提意见！顺祝情人节快乐！ |
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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孙国福
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Joined: 08 Feb 2009
Posts: 63
Location: 吉林长春
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| Posted: 2009-02-14 02:48:15 Post subject: |
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清新、自然。感情真挚！！
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在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑 |
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彤欣
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Posts: 32
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| Posted: 2009-02-14 17:15:34 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢楼上两位！问好！多提意见！ |
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