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一个人的夜空(外六首)
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PostPosted: 2009-02-05 06:03:43    Post subject: 一个人的夜空(外六首) Reply with quote

一个人的夜空


她已经淡出夜色之外
我无法想象旧时的微笑


一个人的夜空
千里无尘


谁闻到腥香的气息
谁成为温柔的刀俎


镜子


她已经从镜子里走出来了
我却仍生活在镜子里面


别人可以在镜子里种些鲜花
我的镜子只长胡子


睡眠是一条虫子

睡眠是一条虫子
已经被你亲手毒瞎
黑夜一直找不到白天


狠毒的女人
为什么不把它毒死
为什么又让它复明


假如


假如你被汽车拐走了
我可以一站一站追查
可以每天换一个站牌等待


假如你跟黎明走了
我就退回最初的夜里
最深的夜里
我要看清楚
露珠在哪一片叶子出现
然后独自潜离


与离开无关


我们一直在讨论离开的话题
我耸耸肩
你摊开手
真的没关系吗


一别一日
我们交流离开的话题
一别三日
我们把离开揣在兜里
一别五日
我们把离开藏在骨头里
一别七日
“是谁
无耻的出卖了自己”
两个人笑得眼泪哗哗流


牵挂


时间在头上轻轻打了三下
寒冷封锁了所有的道路


我试图打开你紧闭的双唇
想听听温热的声音


你到达的城市冷不冷
你到达的城市夜不夜
生疏的床铺习惯吗
可别忘了啊
汽车的呼噜声
就是我大排量的鼾声


面对空空的杯子


风衔来昨天的鸟声
我想起她坐在对面的样子
娴静 端庄
没有多余的语言
就像没有水的杯子


面对一个空空的杯子
隐秘的潮水漫过眼睛
此时
我只想用滚烫的的欲望
触碰玻璃杯冰冷的唇
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PostPosted: 2009-02-05 06:18:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

我要看清楚
露珠在哪一片叶子出现

我们把离开揣在兜里
一别五日
我们把离开藏在骨头里

比较好看
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PostPosted: 2009-02-08 06:47:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢,祝元宵快乐。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-08 18:14:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

也挺有趣~整个的六首诗~也象一次情绪的起伏~
排版可以更好些,便于阅读~标题加上括号类的,比如《》
多写~~
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PostPosted: 2009-02-08 20:49:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

顶一下。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-12 06:57:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢,问好。
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