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莹雪
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Posted: 2009-02-10 14:20:34 Post subject: 元宵

或许品味是最好的思索思索里领悟些许哲理流彩的花灯的确令人眩目但最心怡是团圆这一永久主题或许品味是最佳乐章在缤纷的烟花里寻得激情音符那闪烁的色彩便是欢乐和谐之曲或许品味是最美的文字那汤圆的甘甜会把世间的不快消融让香糯莲蓉、五仁、芝麻…… 把月填满弄圆弄圆的月啊！希望你包容并且香浓形成大爱之无华诗篇

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-10 15:27:50 Post subject:

MM, 好甜的元宵

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-02-10 17:00:04 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM, 好甜的元宵

谢谢姐姐

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-02-11 01:05:52 Post subject:

包容，甘甜，大爱~问好莹雪

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-02-11 14:07:05 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

包容，甘甜，大爱~问好莹雪

谢谢，问好半溪明月！

nobody
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Posted: 2009-02-11 16:42:55 Post subject:

让香糯莲蓉、五仁、芝麻…… 把月填满弄圆弄圆的月啊！希望你包容并且香浓形成大爱之无华诗篇很好。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-02-11 17:37:36 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

让香糯莲蓉、五仁、芝麻……
...

谢谢点评！问好

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-02-11 18:34:05 Post subject:

映雪还好吧？常来啊。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-02-11 20:36:02 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

映雪还好吧？常来啊。

谢谢关心！我很好。就是忙，有空会常来的。

孙国福
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Posted: 2009-02-12 00:32:25 Post subject:

感情真挚，饱满！！！ _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-02-12 14:56:57 Post subject:

孙国福 wrote:

感情真挚，饱满！！！

谢谢点评！问好

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