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《站台:再会》
半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-02-03 20:28:14    Post subject: 《站台:再会》 Reply with quote

《站台:再会》


毛茸茸的太阳下
与深冬的最后一片雪花告别。
红唇之上落有她美丽的轻薄
倦怠的嘲讽。冰凉的甜。

站在一块丢了水银的镜前
忍痛拔掉两肋上的羽毛。
她眼神淡漠,有着惹人厌烦的冷。
我努力朝她堆挤出笑容。

她开始从身体里拆一些旧零件:
叮当作响的喧嚣与金属。
残缺的齿轮,夜长昼短的时钟
废旧轮胎和玻璃玫瑰花。
我将它们一一纳入行李箱。

一大堆行李沉默在辞别的站台
扳道工缓缓将闸扳向回家的轨道。
“再会——”。一经眼泪说出:
火车尖叫着挣脱白雾的辔绳。
越来越远了。云,若有若无的淡。

辎重因重而故意遗失。
轻装上路的人
请仔细替我保藏。我还要回来
回来与你一一清算
我要你十二倍的偿还
——我深深爱着的一切。
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-02-04 00:20:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

轻装上路的人
请仔细替我保藏。我还要回来
回来与你一一清算
我要你十二倍的偿还
——我深深爱着的一切。
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345
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PostPosted: 2009-02-04 13:40:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

站在一块丢了水银的镜前
忍痛拔掉两肋上的羽毛。
她眼神淡漠,有着惹人厌烦的冷。
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I'm nobody! Who are you?
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轻风吹我衣
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PostPosted: 2009-02-04 16:02:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

辎重因重而故意遗失。
轻装上路的人
请仔细替我保藏。我还要回来
回来与你一一清算
我要你十二倍的偿还


意味深长。
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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2009-02-04 17:24:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

确实深长
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-02-05 16:24:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

请仔细替我保藏。我还要回来
回来与你一一清算
我要你十二倍的偿还


WOW, 嗯,,,,,,好吧, 白水兄替你藏着, 十二倍的偿还还不起, 讨个价, 就两倍还吧 Wink
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 06:12:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水兄才华富足,还我十二倍是九牛一毛哦~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 06:14:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

一并问好岛哥,轻风吹我衣、NY,韩少君~
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文立冰
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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 19:16:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

结尾确实好!
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2009-02-08 23:06:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

穿插跳跃这灵动!!!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 06:01:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
穿插跳跃这灵动!!!

老师元宵节快乐!
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