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《清晨,爱上一朵夜来香》
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PostPosted: 2008-08-21 03:10:51    Post subject: 《清晨,爱上一朵夜来香》 Reply with quote

《清晨,爱上一朵夜来香》



清晨,我爱上了一朵夜来香
风中摇曳的灯盏
水边徊徘的黄衣少女
我爱着她脸上昨夜的泪水
一小块时光
倒映着二十年前的悲伤



她从土墙上探出头来
花香的箭簇穿透少年的心
多年前我们曾这样对视
我看见她目光里奔跑的白马
像傍晚在村庄之上盘旋的鸽子



清晨,我爱上一朵夜来香
我爱着她短暂的韶华和孤独的身影
目光向河水深处退却
像慢慢入睡的爱人
修长的手臂抓住我的衣襟
抓住异乡天空飞翔的翅膀
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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PostPosted: 2008-08-21 05:53:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

纯净的诗!
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PostPosted: 2008-08-21 13:26:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢诗人!!!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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PostPosted: 2008-08-21 15:07:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

痛苦的想象和悲伤的回忆都很美丽
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PostPosted: 2008-08-22 16:05:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

纯净流畅。学习问好
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PostPosted: 2008-08-24 17:14:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

好浪漫 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-08-24 20:14:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

清晨般清凉 通透的诗文
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PostPosted: 2008-08-25 02:19:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

浪漫,抒情~
痛苦的想象和悲伤的回忆都很美丽 ----少君好象什么都是痛苦和悲伤!
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PostPosted: 2008-08-25 02:28:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨老师好 学习
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PostPosted: 2008-09-06 02:42:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢楼上诸位诗人!!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-06 03:58:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

浪漫派诗人
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PostPosted: 2010-07-09 14:41:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗歌的意象很美!
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PostPosted: 2010-07-09 21:51:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

她从土墙上探出头来
花香的箭簇穿透少年的心
多年前我们曾这样对视
我看见她目光里奔跑的白马
像傍晚在村庄之上盘旋的鸽子

——赏读。问好。
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