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旧日孤村杳杳

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Posted: 2009-02-08 15:15:36 Post subject: 旧日孤村杳杳

孤村云雨低孤树，风情冷别枝。兹晨雷破土，昨夜梦题丝。下笔凄凉泪，当窗曲折词。不知多少恨，又是一春期。泥涂天外客，烟树远山村。水佩空神女，风裙隐妙龄。当时何绰约，此日倍凄清。磨墨书方润，愁来赋早春。暝色升高树，阴崖抱湿云。牵衣山鬼泣，失足野魂惊。风锯枯茅叶，鸦飞短栎林。独归缘鸟道，无语听松声。断续侵檐雨，踟蹰忆昔心。层云连野水，丛竹乱风声。俯仰生平恨，绸缪岁月情。夜阑千里静，人世有孤灯。风起深山树，溪鸣近岸村。谁家童梦哭，几户犬眠惊。伏枕愁无奈，裁诗恨有因。一生长反侧，羡尔梦中人。 1991.2.11 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2009-02-09 05:09:27 Post subject:

lulu给您问好！泥涂天外客，烟树远山村。水佩空神女，风裙隐妙龄。当时何绰约，此日倍凄清。磨墨书方润，愁来赋早春。很欣赏您的大作，尤其喜欢这一首，怀旧诗，诗句很美！学习了！请多指教！ _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒

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Posted: 2009-02-09 07:38:48 Post subject:

记下这铭刻心骨的日子，读来也凄清！

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Posted: 2009-02-09 08:33:18 Post subject:

有杜诗之风。

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Posted: 2009-02-09 14:35:36 Post subject:

下笔凄凉泪，当窗曲折词祝佳节愉快

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Posted: 2009-02-09 15:12:03 Post subject:

怀旧之深,思念之切,用律之细,遣词之精,堪称上品. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-02-10 06:14:46 Post subject:

拜望欣赏。皆性情高古之作，允为佳制！ _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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Posted: 2009-02-11 14:21:54 Post subject:

欣赏佳作。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2009-02-12 15:12:02 Post subject:

实为少作,谢诸位赏爱. _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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