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伊甸园，幻想和现实

天端
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Posted: 2009-02-03 12:02:21 Post subject: 伊甸园，幻想和现实

梦中的伊甸园啊我和你一样神往人海中的孤寂我和你一样品尝有人说，那就是诗人的道路可我们为什么还要义无反顾地走上？也许就是因为心灵里有了那么一种热度也许就是因为情感里有了那么一种湿度于是，我们就会去触觉冬夜的酷寒，夏日的火烫于是，我们就会去碰撞江水的跌宕，路途的踉跄诗意无觅的焦灼和惆怅激情泻尽的疲惫和渺茫有时，就会像夜雾一样漫过心房于是，你就会像个旅人将那轻风托梦的蓬帐特别地念想于是，你就会变成轻梦将那静谧恬淡的幽芳十分地向往其实，有没有一个伊甸园谁都没有过真的徜徉既然那还是个处女地凭什么肯定那就是天堂？所以啊，伊甸园每次，当我想飞入你的胸膛总会有一种声音传自远方从鸟窝里伸出的等望会将我鼓起的翅膀牵回，放不下心的地方。。。 _________________ 尘世中的一颗微粒

天端
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Posted: 2009-02-03 12:10:52 Post subject:

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Posted: 2009-02-03 12:18:04 Post subject:

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天端
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Posted: 2009-02-03 15:00:01 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

欢迎天端

你可以用
width=200 height=200

编辑一下，就知道我替你修改的了

久仰，老乡！问好！

发布以后还能编辑吗？
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半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-02-03 16:13:49 Post subject:

所以啊，伊甸园每次，当我想飞入你的胸膛总会有一种声音传自远方从鸟窝里伸出的等望会将我鼓起的翅膀牵回，放不下心的地方。。。欢迎天端~生活的基石稳固，伊甸园的理想王国才不虚浮！问好春天！

天端
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Posted: 2009-02-03 16:32:40 Post subject:

问好明月！ _________________ 尘世中的一颗微粒

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Posted: 2009-02-03 16:42:27 Post subject:

天端 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

欢迎天端

你可以用
width=200 height=200

编辑一下，就知道我替你修改的了

久仰，老乡！问好！
...

还能编辑呀:
自己的作品,

版主能编辑其他人的作品
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Posted: 2009-02-03 16:44:36 Post subject:

好美的音乐和诗歌

天端
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Posted: 2009-02-03 17:10:28 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

天端 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

欢迎天端

你可以用
width=200 height=200

编辑一下，就知道我替你修改的了

久仰，老乡！问好！
...

还能编辑呀:
...

谢谢！知道了！老乡！
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