暗香如沁
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 Posted: 2009-01-29 18:25:01 Post subject: 满庭芳.黄昏 |
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半枕清香，一帘幽梦，醒来已近黄昏。
邀梅听雪，雪过了无痕。
漫煮杯茶共月，临佳境、袖卷乾坤。
西风里、挑灯研墨，只影对诗魂。
犹闻！
寂静处，盈盈箫语，似怨还嗔。
掷笔寻踪影，不见人身。
遥想当年司马，也有那、幻境登门。
依栏笑、重铺素帛，词案定三春。
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2009-01-29 19:07:56 Post subject: |
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丰富多彩
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为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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游向高原的鱼
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| Posted: 2009-01-30 06:18:29 Post subject: |
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情趣盎然。
信手赋诗魂。赋可否改为倩？
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暗香如沁
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2009-01-30 16:38:49 Post subject: |
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暗香为求一字之稳而改几十遍,足见精益求精的精神.佩服学习!
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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暗香如沁
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2009-01-31 04:01:44 Post subject: |
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暗香现代女贾岛！  |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2009-02-01 20:09:40 Post subject: |
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好词赏读。
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2009-02-02 07:00:19 Post subject: |
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暗香,"挑灯研墨,重铺素帛",把满庭芳写活!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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