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七绝 欧巴马当选有感(和庆宏老师七绝 奥巴马当选)
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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 02:01:30    Post subject: 七绝 欧巴马当选有感(和庆宏老师七绝 奥巴马当选) Reply with quote

给各位诗友问好,请指教!

七绝 欧巴马当选有感(一)

贫寒才子欧巴马,民主呼声最胜雄。
党派种族多有弊,运筹帷幄坦途通。

七绝 欧巴马当选有感(二)

海风强劲越时空,醉卧沉狮闭影中。
千古经纶当借鉴,笑观南北又西东。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 19:28:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

第二首的转结不错。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 05:16:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

暗香如沁 wrote:
第二首的转结不错。

谢暗香如沁玉赏雅评!给诗友问好!请多多指教!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 21:35:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

奥巴马当选,不知道华人兴奋什么劲?大笑!!!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 06:46:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

暗浮烟 wrote:
奥巴马当选,不知道华人兴奋什么劲?大笑!!!

不管怎样,欢迎你的到来!但从你的字里行间似乎流露出一种不和谐、不友善的情绪在里边!在你的文集里写着“愿意与人为善,请各位多关照!谢谢!”的字样,但在你发出去的帖子里均看到,你似乎对别人写的诗都不满意,要么言辞过激;要么不够友善和礼貌;要么怀疑嘲讽;要么主观臆断。。。请问尊贵的客人,有这种必要吗???大千世界,你看不惯的东西太多了,但你不能把你的意志强加给别人!让地球围着你转!让别人按照你的想法去做!君不知“己所不欲,勿施于人”的道理吗?到头来,你改变不了别人,改变不了世界,你只能改变你自己!
作为一个人,即使你有再高的学识和水平,都要学会随和,学会尊重他人,学会有礼貌,学会成熟,学会和平、友好与他人相处!这是做人最基本的要求!
文学来源于生活,反映客观现实,抒发人的情感。当今社会,人们可以畅所欲言,谈古论今,这本是无可厚非的事情,难道有什么可质疑的吗?
我乃善良之人,一向与人为善,与你萍水相逢,无冤无仇。我希望在此结识一些品德高尚,为人友善,才华出众的知音和朋友,多向别人学习优点,长处,不断提高自己。
网友之间切磋知识,共同进步本是一件很快乐的事情,但你的这种做法,很不受人欢迎!我认为甚为不妥,实为下策!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 14:29:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

七绝 和为贵

斗气争端为哪般?见仁见智各悠闲。
世间多少纷争事,相互宽容结善缘。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-29 00:55:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
七绝 和为贵
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和庆宏老师 七绝 和为贵

笑看世间奇与善,仁人智者乃为贤。
不惊荣辱观花落,心里装船四海宽。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 06:04:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

希望奥兄政治更民主一点

别像前任那样爱将那一个国家元首拉出来崭首就崭首

萨达姆活该

谁来审判布什?
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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 08:37:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

连南河 wrote:
希望奥兄政治更民主一点
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“希望奥兄政治更民主一点

别像前任那样爱将那一个国家元首拉出来崭首就崭首”lulu很赞同您的观点!给诗友问好,请多指教!
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