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Posted: 2009-01-26 00:09:29 Post subject: 七绝 夜思 |
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给各位诗友问好,请指教!
七绝 夜思
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深夜窗前料峭寒,
一弯明月挂星间。
灯前倚案敲音韵,
弹奏光阴又一年。 _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒 |
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Joined: 25 Jan 2009 Posts: 264 Location: dream home luluCollection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 09:12:07 Post subject: |
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谢玉赏雅评!lulu深感水平有限,希望多向您学习! _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒 |
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