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喜爱工具
韩少君
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PostPosted: 2008-12-25 03:51:25    Post subject: 喜爱工具 Reply with quote

喜爱工具
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我喜欢那些铁锹(洋)镐手锤和扳手钳子
包括农村的笸箩和簸箕

我的工具箱、仓房摆满了各样工具

先告诉你
我不是体力劳动者
我只是喜欢这些名称而已

我欣赏着这些铁器或木器
或草本的编织
并把它们摆放得整整齐齐

它们要做或者已经付出了很多劳动
我不知道这些器物有没有
后悔的情绪

不过我有
我没有成为好工具
没有它们聪明

我很少和它们说话
让它们 于我不在的时候
自己交谈去


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碾子、磨

这些应该成为设备了
不算工具

在当时是固定资产 不算工具

现在它们在路旁的壕沟里
不再与油灯、蛛网
和磨房为伴

我们曾在磨盘上午睡
三伏天 苍蝇很多
围着驴子嗡嗡转
偶尔也有蜻蜓飞错了地方

碾子、磨 不算工具
我的工具箱也装不进去

只能装在昨天
那些与工具有关的童谣里

扯大锯 拉大锯
姥家门口唱大戏

旋风旋风你是鬼
三把镰刀砍你腿

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PostPosted: 2008-12-25 10:05:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

寓意与物, 着墨不俗.非常欣赏.
其实我们每个人都是工具, 都会在有意无意之间为人所用. 用就用吧, 想想他人给于自己的帮助, 为人所用也是一种回报和快乐吧.
记得有一次上课, 对比各种文化差异, 老师提了一个简单的不能再简单的问题:"为什么人们愿意作'义工'?" 有人答:"为了得到北美的工作经验." 有人却说:" 这是自身的一种需求." 两种答案都没错, 却折射出不同的色彩.

问好圣诞.
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2008-12-25 12:44:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢白水先生,您的言语很对。我所遗憾的是 没有成为社会的好工具。祝你健康愉快!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-25 18:05:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

只能装在昨天
那些与工具有关的童谣里
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PostPosted: 2008-12-25 19:54:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

举重若轻!学习!问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-25 22:52:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
谢白水先生,您的言语很对。我所遗憾的是 没有成为社会的好工具。祝你健康愉快!


理解, 不同的角度吧. 问好双节, 阖家欢乐 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-12-28 20:03:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗意简洁直接有浓厚的思想深度。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-29 17:17:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

我们都吟唱过最后的结尾~~
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PostPosted: 2008-12-30 23:48:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

希望你写得再狠一点儿,每一点都狠,就有点儿字字珠玑的感觉,让句子中的字有了更多统一后的分离度。这样你还能在这一类的题材里进步。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 00:31:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

再看,喜欢第一首,很亲切。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 22:39:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏问好,新年快乐!
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