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乖,一个故事
陈子寒
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Joined: 03 Dec 2008
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PostPosted: 2009-01-20 00:54:16    Post subject: 乖,一个故事 Reply with quote

乖,一个故事

陈子寒

花卉市场看到盆植物,鲜艳的红色,娇嫩
所谓的断肠花,传说女人的泪水浇灌
故事美丽,不见得真实。一下接一下亲吻

男女之间不过如此,浓时如蜜,淡了似水
今天,情投意合,如胶似漆,明天就陌路
哭有何用,开出断肠花,不见得就能让
负心的人回心转意。白白流那么多眼泪
往日的快乐。纯净无比的白莲花,很神圣

开放,哪怕丁点大的花也行,亲自煮咖啡
可挤不出一滴,毕竟生活在新世纪边缘
不是古代的女子,流不出泪,开不了花!

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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2009-01-21 03:22:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

结尾不错。不是古代的女子,流不出泪,开不了花!
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