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五絕 - 步韻蔣世鴻《鳥孤鳴》

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-01-04 09:49:15 Post subject: 五絕 - 步韻蔣世鴻《鳥孤鳴》

新年將至，身處繁華都市，卻失業經年，心中感慨，遂作此詩。孤鳥寄桃林，晨陰雨露深。姚花不堪曲，盈淚感餘音。注：寄：寄居外地姚：美好嬌艷

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Posted: 2007-01-04 13:56:19 Post subject:

临屏草和: 五绝<闻> 漫步度槡林, 枝横乱草深忽闻天籁曲, 嫵媚放悲音问好MM, 愿你快乐

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Posted: 2007-01-04 22:01:22 Post subject:

謝雅和。 “槡”林？字典裏好像沒這字。應該是“桑”林吧。

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Posted: 2007-01-04 22:18:31 Post subject:

确实雅和欢迎戴玨MM _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-01-05 09:09:19 Post subject:

戴玨 wrote:

謝雅和。
“槡”林？字典裏好像沒這字。應該是“桑”林吧。

谢探讨. 就树而论, “槡”“桑”同义. “桑”似用途泛些, 比如"桑拿","桑巴", "格桑花".......己见, 不知MM是否同意 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-01-06 01:41:47 Post subject:

白水 wrote:

戴玨 wrote:

謝雅和。
“槡”林？字典裏好像沒這字。應該是“桑”林吧。

谢探讨. 就树而论, “槡”“桑”同义. “桑”似用途泛些, 比如"桑拿","桑巴", "格桑花".......己见, 不知MM是否同意 Very Happy

我猜得到寫的是一種樹，只是字典沒這字，我查過現代漢語辭典和辭源，都找不到這個字。“桑”字條下面也沒有寫有“槡”這個异體（或繁體）的同義字。

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Posted: 2007-01-06 08:07:36 Post subject:

MM真是好学之人, 白水惭愧. 临屏搞笑一游吧木又又木又为槡辭典辭源未曾藏? 又双重林槡园碧槡蚕丝尽缀华章

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Posted: 2007-01-06 11:25:23 Post subject:

我做旁听生 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-01-06 12:05:59 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

我做旁听生

旁听生也要交作业

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Posted: 2007-01-06 12:31:42 Post subject:

偷听总行吧 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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