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是谁让我想起了大海(组诗)
子在川上曰
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PostPosted: 2009-11-22 20:06:09    Post subject: 是谁让我想起了大海(组诗) Reply with quote

是谁让我想起了大海(组诗)
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1/湿漉漉的海水是一种诱惑

从远处飞奔而来
尖叫、笑声还有眼泪
湿漉漉的海水充满了诱惑
你的世界开始倾斜

海水一步步地紧逼
你叹息着慢慢地退缩
只剩下最后的城堡了
这是一座被包围了的孤岛

海水一浪高过一浪
拍打着你的窗户
面对镜中的自己 你想起了一首歌
有多少水手湮没在自己的梦里


2/面对着大海,我是一只飞翔的海鸟

面对着一张照片 我听到了海浪的咆哮声
无数的浪花溅湿了我的前额
我是一块固执的礁石了
潮起潮落中 慢慢远离你的视线

有时候,抚摸着照片上边的空白
我想,我是一只飞翔的海鸟了
从高空 俯冲下来 尖叫
再迅速爬升到一个与你对视的高度

生活就是无数次心跳、心动和颤抖
至于时间 不要去理睬
谁拥有时间 谁就成为了历史


3/是谁让我想起了大海


有多少人追逐着梦见了大海的人?
抱着那个破旧不堪的陶罐
还有谁知道 我就是拥抱大海的人?

在每一个美丽的月圆之夜
你轻轻地爬出那个陶罐
抱紧我的梦 在海浪的澎湃声中
和我一起 潮起潮落


是谁捡起了这块固执的石头
砸破了那个古老的陶罐

梦里
海水汹涌而出
那些成群结队的鱼
都是被谁遗忘了的记忆?


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PostPosted: 2009-11-26 03:39:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

强悍
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PostPosted: 2009-11-26 07:44:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢朋友的点评,祝好,周末快乐!
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PostPosted: 2009-11-28 00:25:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得深入,正如刀秋月风说强悍
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PostPosted: 2009-11-28 03:25:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢了。汗颜呀!
俺只能更加努力的了!
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