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《给母亲》《08年的寒冷仍在继续》
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PostPosted: 2009-01-06 04:36:48    Post subject: 《给母亲》《08年的寒冷仍在继续》 Reply with quote

《给母亲》

我希望明天给您打个电话
感谢您这个给我生命的平凡女人。
而晚上,您抢先打来了电话
我想您会说:“红仔,生日快乐。”
可您只问我冷不冷,说为我
做了一件小棉袄。

妈妈,您老了。
已老得不记得,您最疼爱的
女儿的生日,但您仍记得
一直惦念着她的冷和热。
女儿应是母亲的小棉袄
可我却万水千山,千山万水
温暖不了您漫长的寒冬。


《08年的寒冷仍在继续》


现在已是09年了,但08年的寒仍在继续。
08年的冷是从某个季节开始的
无声无息,像黑夜弥漫过来
等你觉察到,冷——已浸入骨头。
而08年已经溜走,它已回身撤退。

但留下的寒让季节持续加深,危机加深。
战争还在继续,热衷于PK者还在PK。
从南方回来的人,怀里揣着刀子
我的身边发生了第一宗命案。

08年的母牛站上09年的路口
08年的人肉引擎冲破09年的喉锁。
雪杉还在耸立,紫荆脱光了树皮
瘦骨嶙峋地爱情仍在负隅顽抗。

衷情者仍在衷情,仇恨者仍在仇恨。
我不爱不恨,虽做着麻木的看客
但因为寒,亦有了冰凌那尖锐的痛。
“原谅我,走近你,也是为了离去。”(杨键诗句)
08年已经离去,而寒未去,
09年已经走近,而春未来。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-06 04:43:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

《给母亲》写的见真情 。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-06 04:43:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

《给母亲》写的见真情 。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-06 07:28:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

生日快乐 cheers
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PostPosted: 2009-01-06 19:14:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

《给母亲》

我希望明天给您打个电话
感谢您这个给我生命的平凡女人。
而晚上,您抢先打来了电话
我想您会说:“红仔,生日快乐。”
可您只问我冷不冷,说为我
做了一件小棉袄。

妈妈,您老了。
已老得不记得,您最疼爱的
女儿的生日,但您仍记得
一直惦念着她的冷和热。
女儿应是母亲的小棉袄
可我却万水千山,千山万水
温暖不了您漫长的寒冬。
朴实真情,令人感动!第一段尤其好.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-07 07:01:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

女儿是母亲的小棉袄,母亲更是女儿的小棉袄...
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PostPosted: 2009-01-07 20:10:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

从南方回来的人,怀里揣着刀子

确实是动荡不安的时代。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-09 20:02:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
生日快乐 cheers

谢白水~又老了一岁啦!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-09 20:03:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

爱月 wrote:
《给母亲》写的见真情 。
谢爱月评读~
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PostPosted: 2009-01-09 20:04:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

吟啸徐行 wrote:
《给母亲》
...
问好朋友~谢评!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-09 20:05:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

骨笛 wrote:
女儿是母亲的小棉袄,母亲更是女儿的小棉袄...
是啊,不过我这棉袄太缺少温度了~
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PostPosted: 2009-01-09 20:06:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
从南方回来的人,怀里揣着刀子

确实是动荡不安的时代。
因为经济萧条,四川回来许多民工,越到年关小偷抢劫的事故越多~
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