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是瞬间,是永恒(四首)
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PostPosted: 2009-01-08 04:56:27    Post subject: 是瞬间,是永恒(四首) Reply with quote

是瞬间,是永恒(四首)

韦桥送


《风》
  
  风很大
  白果林没有树叶的沙沙
  前面的黄水湖没有一丝波纹
  
  风从你的嘴里放出来
  无边的草地开裂
  浑厚的山群摇摆
  
  把黑夜吹进我的眼睛
  肿胀堵塞了轨道
  弄乱了飘飞的繁星
  
  2008.11.09
  
  
  《雨》
  
  秋天成熟的时候
  天空湛蓝湛蓝
  树梢滴黄滴黄
  
  我的思想森林饥渴地
  饮尽一片火海
  留下一山的逗号
  
  雨傻痴痴地坠落
  除了我的眼和身体
  箭!箭!箭!苍白的血花
  
  2008.11.11
  
  
  《雷》
  
  雷甩出银鞭的声音
  憋足劲向目的地奔跑
  我挥起马车迎击困怠大军
  
  我把它碾碎,抛向身后
  败军的残甲粘满马的汗孔
  装点勇士的威武
  
  漫漫人生路
  我在雷声里奋起
  用四条腿继续出发
  
  2008.11. 12
  
  
  《电》
  
  乌云试图遮挡一时的天光
  我焦急得连连怒吼
  眼里放出电,射向它的心脏
  
  我勤勤恳恳地劳动
  是晒黑在阳光下的矮子
  又是准备在正义枪膛里的子弹
  
  我有九亿双眼睛
  都是用来爱我的土地的
  哪怕身躯,喂养土地长生
  
  2008.11.12

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PostPosted: 2009-01-09 19:43:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

风从你的嘴里放出来
  无边的草地开裂
  浑厚的山群摇摆

很好地题材,如果能找到别人不一样的角度去写会出新~
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