齐遂林 秀才
Joined: 15 Nov 2006 Posts: 158
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Posted: 2009-02-20 16:02:43 Post subject: (原创)小重山 |
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昨夜扑蝶姐梦中。一湾溪水碧,半山红。香汗悄抹袖无声。扑哧笑,千翅乱花从。
醒来意朦胧。猫咪懒腰起,遁匆匆。寂寞理鬓不夜灯。悠悠叹,凉透正月风。
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2009-02-21 08:22:15 Post subject: |
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好文彩!
绮梦无边: 溪水碧,半山红. 扑哧笑,乱花丛. 却又:意朦胧,遁匆匆. 无奈:悠悠叹,凉透五更风! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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南之北 童生
Joined: 02 Dec 2008 Posts: 81 Location: 大陆 南之北Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-21 15:55:08 Post subject: |
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轻巧有趣,欣赏好词! _________________ 我的诗词吾爱网个人主页:http://www.52shici.com/space.php?mem_id=6419 |
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