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思伊人
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 17:47:42    Post subject: 思伊人 Reply with quote
一曲枉凝眉，神往不知归。

拍案腾空去，凌风下翠微。

执手寝鸾帐，贴面吻凤眉。

千年雄鸡闹，丽影总依偎。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 18:11:37    Post subject: Reply with quote
情深意浓。
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南之北
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 18:22:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
一点个见：
“拍案腾空去”与前面“神往不知归”的意境不大和谐，转变太突兀；
“执手寝鸾帐，贴面吻凤眉”语太露，意境不甚雅。
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