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蜜月之夜
金川诗歌
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 20:36:10    Post subject: 蜜月之夜 Reply with quote

蜜月之夜

黑夜一张嘴
我与远离我的世界
同时融化在
一张甜蜜的嘴里
我们成为
同一个美妙的词

同住在一个屋子
天空闪烁同一盏灯
月亮
照见我的内,我的外
也是我的爱人

二〇〇八年三月九日
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詩盜喜裸評
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Location: 台湾,台北
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PostPosted: 2008-12-27 03:44:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

读起来有些欠缺。
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