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七律南丝绸之路遗址

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2008-12-03 18:53:11 Post subject: 七律南丝绸之路遗址

鸡唱亭边观日影马嘶石上数蹄痕黄老师好诗，最欣赏这颈联。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

又一方天
秀才

Joined: 16 Nov 2006
Posts: 385

又一方天Collection

Posted: 2008-12-03 22:53:00 Post subject:

秦衢汉埠留记忆 ,又见陆程接海程 ----陆程接海程，显现出南路不同于大漠孤烟的特色，好作欣赏！ _________________ 空钩久垂钓得烟波月醉

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2008-12-04 06:38:34 Post subject:

黄兄妙笔生花! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

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Posted: 2008-12-04 08:22:09 Post subject:

黄老师好诗！

白水
大学士

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Posted: 2008-12-04 18:29:38 Post subject:

欣赏. 问好黄老师

黄洋界
探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
黄洋界Collection

Posted: 2008-12-06 19:27:13 Post subject:

谢谢方天兄白云兄庆宏白水兄评阅. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

是有缘
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Joined: 08 Feb 2008
Posts: 741

是有缘Collection

Posted: 2008-12-08 19:45:22 Post subject:

依稀辨着昔日的商路 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

黄洋界
探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
黄洋界Collection

Posted: 2008-12-08 23:44:55 Post subject:

谢谢有缘兄赏阅. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

老山
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Joined: 05 May 2007
Posts: 319

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Posted: 2008-12-09 06:08:43 Post subject: 欣赏

鸡唱亭边观日出马嘶石上数蹄痕由近而远由今而古欣赏！

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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冰清Collection

Posted: 2008-12-09 16:57:45 Post subject:

气韵不错。黄兄把静态的遗址写得如此栩栩如生，佩服。

黄洋界
探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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Posted: 2008-12-09 22:57:37 Post subject:

谢谢老山兄冰清评阅. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

蠢读斋主人
童生

Joined: 14 Dec 2008
Posts: 26

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Posted: 2008-12-17 06:07:34 Post subject:

不知何故,该诗被丢失大半,现重录如下: 驿路西风漫步行商旅队队眼前横贯通内地丝绸道开拓东南茶马城鸡唱亭边观日影马嘶石上数蹄痕秦衢汉埠留记忆又见陆城接海程黄洋界注

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