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新诗 – 白鹿洞书院

魏鵬展
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Posted: 2011-03-16 17:00:17 Post subject: 新诗 – 白鹿洞书院

白鹿洞书院魏鹏展一只麻雀穿过竹丛蕉树中听到鸟声绿叶消化了城市的气味钓矶石抛下的鱼饵钓起了五老峯的蝉声明伦堂的格物致知应镶上防腐赐额御书是端正的涂鸦状元桥上的笑声和闪光不知礼圣殿上的名字数只蜻蜓飞过钓矶石上的清流竹丛中的蝉声 2011年2月5日深夜 _________________ 香港文學報《小說與詩》投稿方法+稿約、稿例、最新一期目錄： http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_60b7bcff01018dcp.html 魏鵬展是香港詩人、《小說與詩》主編、中文教師；微信(WeChat): npcjeffrey

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Posted: 2011-03-17 16:36:32 Post subject:

赐额御书是端正的涂鸦

魏鵬展
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Posted: 2011-03-17 19:28:47 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

赐额御书是端正的涂鸦

謝謝閱讀
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http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_60b7bcff01018dcp.html

魏鵬展是香港詩人、《小說與詩》主編、中文教師；微信(WeChat): npcjeffrey

上城
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Posted: 2011-03-18 08:01:31 Post subject:

钓起了五老峯的蝉声竹丛中的蝉声两处蝉声似乎有些重复 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2011-03-18 15:08:48 Post subject:

简洁、凝炼、柔美小诗！问候诗人 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

魏鵬展
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Posted: 2011-03-18 22:48:56 Post subject:

上城 wrote:

钓起了五老峯的蝉声

竹丛中的蝉声

两处蝉声似乎有些重复

我對蟬聲有很深的感觸，這樣重複是為是深化主題。
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香港文學報《小說與詩》投稿方法+稿約、稿例、最新一期目錄：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_60b7bcff01018dcp.html

魏鵬展是香港詩人、《小說與詩》主編、中文教師；微信(WeChat): npcjeffrey

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