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五律 和流年粉黛（四）
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PostPosted: 2008-12-14 13:07:11    Post subject: 五律 和流年粉黛（四） Reply with quote
不算和诗，只是七律变五律：

疏雨惊寒夜，清风泣晚秋。
阶前残菊瘦，腮底泪儿羞。
弦断清风续，鹦飞隐痛流。
这般难启口，壶嘴做箫头。
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流年粉黛原玉七律：

疏雨促檐惊破夜，阴风裹叶泣深秋。
阶前晚菊瘦还瘦，腮底泪儿羞又羞。
恨断弦丝风韵续，忍教鹦鹉隐私流。
这般如此难登口，于是腰壶作酒头。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-14 16:18:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
wow, 好棒. 顶个 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-12-20 05:50:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
新玉原玉皆棒
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PostPosted: 2008-12-20 20:44:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
连南河 wrote:
新玉原玉皆棒

谢连兄雅评。
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