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桌子上的一枚桔子【三首】

邹崧蔚
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Posted: 2008-12-08 21:08:06 Post subject: 桌子上的一枚桔子【三首】

《现在》虽耕有其地种有其亩也无更多索取唯日升日落间繁花极速变幻迅速枯荣弓背白首间两眼前仍旧苍茫成片虽用心细耕用心细种仍不失身单力薄步履蹒跚《桌子上的一枚桔子》原来泥土还有此种颜色一团菊花的蓓蕾风雨雷电聚集的一团问候金灿灿地放在桌子上此桌子迅速掉漆斑驳在冬天的房间里有如此的一团光芒阴冷中多多少少添加了一丁点的温馨《这雨》满天冰晶霜花里唯你飘落冰冷中寻找温热水泥路上寻找软土泥土中寻找最干净的满天冰晶霜花里唯你飘落这雨 _________________ 我能说什么呢，我什么也没有说，是他在说。

刘浪
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Posted: 2008-12-08 21:41:56 Post subject:

蛮喜欢的！或许是那种卑微，让人心生怜悯吧。问好！ _________________ 是金子也会花光地

邹崧蔚
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Posted: 2008-12-09 20:16:01 Post subject:

刘浪 wrote:

蛮喜欢的！或许是那种卑微，让人心生怜悯吧。问好！

问好朋友，谢谢理解丑作，刚来乍到请多多批评。
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nobody
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Posted: 2008-12-09 20:28:38 Post subject:

第一个棒。欢迎。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-12-10 02:36:38 Post subject:

《桌子上的一枚桔子》原来泥土还有此种颜色一团菊花的蓓蕾风雨雷电聚集的一团问候金灿灿地放在桌子上此桌子迅速掉漆斑驳在冬天的房间里有如此的一团光芒阴冷中多多少少添加了一丁点的温馨 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

邹崧蔚
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Posted: 2008-12-10 15:44:37 Post subject:

[quote="nobody"]第一个棒。欢迎。[/quote 多谢朋友的欢迎和鼓励，请多多批评吆。 _________________ 我能说什么呢，我什么也没有说，是他在说。

邹崧蔚
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Posted: 2008-12-10 15:46:55 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

《桌子上的一枚桔子》
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问候亲爱的朋友，谢谢批阅，请以后多多批评指教。
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韩少君
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Posted: 2008-12-10 21:46:00 Post subject:

不错。在冬天的房间里有如此的一团光芒阴冷中多多少少添加了一丁点的温馨 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

邹崧蔚
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Posted: 2008-12-11 01:27:27 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

不错。
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还是喊大哥吧，谢谢大哥指点小弟，小弟送一个祝福。
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