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谁的小窗，谁的心港

悠子
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Posted: 2008-12-04 04:28:06 Post subject: 谁的小窗，谁的心港

走过失落的树林落雪被踩成细腻的破碎倾听静寂无声鸟归去了，山野不再有笑意眼睛和季节一起荒芜如凝固的冰霜不想穿过或沉湎于什么我牵挂的碧波浩淼憔悴在没有方向的地方无法执意去唤醒缜密的枝桠光秃秃切割着冷风的痕迹硌痛玻璃样的天我开始找到一些平淡的故事伤感、等待，和几线不言而喻的希望 12/04/2008

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2008-12-04 13:06:35 Post subject:

找到脚印就有回家的希望~~不对，别是熊踪，咱别跟错了就糟了 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-12-04 20:05:30 Post subject:

悠子回来了。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-12-05 11:39:01 Post subject:

梅花烙哪？拿出来~~我特喜欢诗的切入点。最后那两句要讨论讨论和失盗~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

悠子
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Posted: 2008-12-05 12:40:11 Post subject: 如果没有喝高，大概不会搞错

红袖添乱 wrote:

找到脚印就有回家的希望~~不对，别是熊踪，咱别跟错了就糟了

悠子
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Posted: 2008-12-05 12:51:19 Post subject: 我找骂呀这是

红袖添乱 wrote:

梅花烙哪？
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红袖添乱
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Posted: 2008-12-05 12:54:02 Post subject: 我忍不住了~~揪着你讲话

真不好意思~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

悠子
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Posted: 2008-12-05 13:47:53 Post subject: 那你也来烙烙

红袖添乱 wrote:

真不好意思~~

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Posted: 2008-12-05 16:18:31 Post subject:

好棒呀！就是怕把熊招来了 _ _________________ 瞠目结舌

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-12-06 09:58:13 Post subject: 你还不清楚悠子的风格？我想想个例子。

红袖添乱 wrote:

梅花烙哪？
...

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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-12-08 15:29:00 Post subject:

意识到那是一种风格 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-12-13 08:00:25 Post subject:

悠子好。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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