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※ 庭 院
李有明
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PostPosted: 2009-01-17 03:21:41    Post subject: ※ 庭 院 Reply with quote
※ 庭 院

天说凉就凉了
邻居家训斥孩子的声音还没有变短
房檐下有些人在退回房子
风扇停止 时间停止
那杯水晃动的水面有杂质
饮水机间断地停了、响了
像一个年迈人的呼吸

小白兔在院子里撒着欢
没几天的好日子了
很多东西会在秋天褪色
马路上并驾的两头牛
忘记着哞叫
花盆中的植被已移除
散落的泥土被夏季领走

风抓起飞沙扬在脸上
我并没有提前愤怒
树叶不自在的落着
所有的花开注视着鸟鸣
还有人挥动臂膀做着态势语

你好 秋风
一个人正在睡醒
夏日的太阳让他爱上了午睡
他的女人即将远离而去
他回到房子
想起了一个叫秋风的女孩
想着哪些墙角还有倦怠的痛
用牙齿慢慢切割嘴中的食物
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-01-17 06:33:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
想着哪些墙角还有倦怠的痛
用牙齿慢慢切割嘴中的食物

有淡淡的痛~
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2009-01-17 17:46:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
读出倦怠的痛,一并问好明月姐姐.
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轻风吹我衣
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PostPosted: 2009-01-17 21:20:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
不错。
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掸去世事纷纭 只想以纤纤心丝 织平一方世界
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李有明
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PostPosted: 2009-06-13 12:47:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
轻风吹我衣 wrote:
不错。
握手！
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PostPosted: 2009-06-13 12:48:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
赵福治 wrote:
读出倦怠的痛,一并问好明月姐姐.

多谢老师！
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PostPosted: 2009-06-13 12:48:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
想着哪些墙角还有倦怠的痛
用牙齿慢慢切割嘴中的食物

有淡淡的痛~
问好，多指正！
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