红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-03 14:53:42 Post subject: 诗盗裸评 |
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号称七绝
诗做雕栏韵入花
盗来香魄做枝丫
裸风低唱秋歌晚
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拱猪哪,快去领猪耳朵 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
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曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-03 21:26:09 Post subject: |
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不但妙而切好 新诗写得好 旧韵亦绝 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 04:19:28 Post subject: |
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拱到猪窝窝里来了 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 20:04:13 Post subject: |
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美死~謝謝紅袖! _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-05 12:59:06 Post subject: 爱臭美的猪猪~~ |
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_________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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拈花微笑 秀才
Joined: 21 Jan 2008 Posts: 311
拈花微笑Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-05 16:15:45 Post subject: |
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咋办? _________________ 瞠目结舌 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-06 09:55:58 Post subject: 俺再来臭美一次! |
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_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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上城 进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007 Posts: 2024 Location: 江夏黄鹤楼 上城Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-07 20:17:50 Post subject: |
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太有才了  _________________ 每个诗人都很重要 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-08 15:13:09 Post subject: |
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顶顶! _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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