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最近的一组 很乱的!朋友们批!
木鱼
童生


Joined: 20 Oct 2008
Posts: 34

木鱼Collection
PostPosted: 2008-12-08 00:09:03    Post subject: 最近的一组 很乱的!朋友们批! Reply with quote

我可以想象一轮明月

长在我的梦里
不是
一天两天了,就像
一头野性未消的兽,整天
舔食我的血液
08.12.07

靠近家乡时

我的心早就飞了
穿过
一片桃林,一片酣睡的
桃花,还不曾醒来

而我,早就听到她开放的声音
摸到她火烧的脸庞
08.12.07

我不安心
文/木鱼
外婆的病,一直都在严重
脑血栓的威胁,使她
成为植物人,躺
在床上.像一架年久失修的钟,仍然
一天天 悄然的“滴答,滴答”

仿佛在喊着:疼!

08.12.07

感情
文/木鱼
是一条饲养在身体里的虫子
一点点,再
一点点的

吞噬薄儿女人的心

08.12.8

温暖
文/木鱼
高楼冰冷轮廓的背影里

晚霞-----

是母亲炉里跳出的火苗

08.12.5
大碗里的乡情
文/木鱼
自私的爱着鲁北的一个地方,那个地方的
人;那个地方的牛羊;那个地方的
麦田;和麦田里的月亮。银色的光泻进我的碗
我端着父亲的耙,母亲的皱纹 生出的粮食

我端着故事,故事里的人,都逃不出我的
大碗,端住沉甸甸的故乡.游走他乡的人
勇于举出这只碗,和碗里溢出
坦荡荡的光

08.12.08

回到冬天
文--木鱼
我可以躲到,过去
安然地度过冬天。
针尖上的生活 只有我
独立行走,穿梭
整个雪嵌的故乡

一路走,一边欢畅的流泪
那颗明朝的月亮
挂满我的泪水,一串串珍珠
撒在故乡匆匆成长的麦芽里
08.12.06
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杯中冲浪
进士出身


Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection
PostPosted: 2008-12-08 00:24:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的一组,尤其前面几首,短促耐嚼,很好。
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木鱼
童生


Joined: 20 Oct 2008
Posts: 34

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PostPosted: 2008-12-08 17:45:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好杯水冲浪朋友!欢迎常来~~~
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莞君
秀才


Joined: 20 Oct 2007
Posts: 561
Location: 中国 陕西
莞君Collection
PostPosted: 2008-12-08 18:25:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

干净 跳跃
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刘浪
秀才


Joined: 04 Dec 2008
Posts: 227

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PostPosted: 2008-12-08 22:00:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

几个短的真不错,很喜欢!
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