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城市的边缘
闲雅
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PostPosted: 2007-01-08 19:45:37    Post subject: 城市的边缘 Reply with quote

城市的边缘

我走在
城市的边缘
感觉不到自己
作为普通人的存在
远处
城市的欢歌与我无关
城市的灯火斓珊如黑夜一般

我走在
城市的边缘
抬头仰望星辰
每一步都如此艰难
渴望
璀灿的流星划过夜空
点燃我灵魂深处黯淡的光辉

我走在
城市的边缘
怀着破碎梦想
疲惫的心四处流浪
回往
遥远的记忆越过山岗
不会被边缘的岁月轻易遗忘

我走在
城市的边缘
面对冷淡现实
我坚守孤独的向往
寻觅
心中的守望随风飘香
沁透了昨日尘世漂泊的沧桑
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和平岛
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2007-01-08 19:56:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

闲雅的诗歌
文如其名
名如其人吧
Very Happy
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闲雅
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PostPosted: 2007-01-08 20:07:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

和平岛过奖了! 幽默!
一些随想加一点感悟吧。
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nobody
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PostPosted: 2007-01-08 20:25:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

俺明白了

感觉不到自己
作为普通人的存在
=
感觉到自己
作为不普通人的存在 Laughing
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