丘河
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醉松
春融冰骨慕红装，羡尽柳林儿女郎。
最是三秋匆猝过，独酌正是雪纷飏。
怨杨
娇绿逢霜当速去，朝朝何必对寒吟。
早知痴叶骚风误，翠幄覆侬何至今。
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秋叶
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| Posted: 2008-12-05 22:20:18 Post subject: |
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怨杨[/b][/color][/size]
娇绿逢霜当速去，朝朝何必对寒吟。
早知痴叶骚风误，翠幄覆侬何至今。[/quote]
喜欢这首。 问好！ |
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游向高原的鱼
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| Posted: 2008-12-06 01:47:46 Post subject: |
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独酌正是雪纷飏。
个性十足。
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2008-12-06 05:59:54 Post subject: |
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也喜第二首。
同一诗中“春融冰骨慕红装”与“独酌正是雪纷飏”在时节上似乎有矛盾，前是春，后是冬，诗友请推敲。 |
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丘河
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| Posted: 2008-12-08 04:17:44 Post subject: |
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谢谢朋友关照，小诗原是去跨四季之意，不独在冬季！！ 
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qinghongh
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| 谢谢朋友关照，小诗原是去跨四季之意，不独在冬季！！ |
有理！恍然大悟。好！ |
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冰清
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| Posted: 2008-12-08 09:47:37 Post subject: |
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醉松
春融冰骨慕红装，羡尽柳林儿女郎。
最是三秋匆猝过，独酌正是雪纷飏。 |
"独酌"传神，境界全出! |
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