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七绝和流年粉黛（二）

qinghongh
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Posted: 2008-12-04 16:33:53 Post subject: 七绝和流年粉黛（二）

七绝和流年粉黛（二）柳拂水面似霞烟，春意熏人燕缠绵。遥见岸边持帕女，依依相送凤楼前？流年粉黛原玉：风穿堂院淡炊烟，燕燕徘徊戏柳绵。鹂语缓催罗帕女，相逢一笑凤楼前。

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Posted: 2008-12-04 18:28:01 Post subject:

唱和都很美.

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Posted: 2008-12-04 18:45:08 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

唱和都很美.

谢白水兄！可惜美图我转不过来。

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Posted: 2008-12-04 19:00:28 Post subject:

为什么? 是不会上传吗?

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Posted: 2008-12-04 19:13:16 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

为什么? 是不会上传吗?

我还真不会上传图片。有空请白水兄赐教！

Embarassed

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-12-05 02:16:42 Post subject:

与白水兄之评同感. 结句似不该用问号,从前后文看,是肯定的语气.请酌定. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-12-05 07:11:08 Post subject:

情意缠绵! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2008-12-05 08:55:16 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

与白水兄之评同感.

结句似不该用问号,从前后文看,是肯定的语气.请酌定.

谢黄老师赏评。这两首和诗是看图赋诗，所以不太肯定情节，故而用了问句。黄老师细心人。

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Posted: 2008-12-05 08:55:59 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

情意缠绵!

谢白云赏读。

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