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林宗申
童生


Joined: 29 Jul 2008
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Location: 四川省
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PostPosted: 2008-12-04 20:26:35    Post subject: 片 段(外一首) Reply with quote

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林宗申

广场上一些烧烤摊
横七竖八的摆放着
我下午的思绪

一个捡垃圾的人
路过我的面前,停下
又一个人拾起城市的
碎片

你和我同时注意到
一对老夫妻走过放映厅

几十年后,城市升起
另一道风景线

画 布

天空呈一片
死灰色的宁静
画布上有五种颜色

有五个头颅
亲吻你的身体
身后尾随慌乱的脚步
抵达。向前后延伸

成为画家的部分
往天幕画一具骨架
涂上颜色,看他走动
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白水
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 19:58:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

几十年后,城市升起
另一道风景线
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莞君
秀才


Joined: 20 Oct 2007
Posts: 561
Location: 中国 陕西
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 20:23:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

提读 细节好 握
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