田味园隐翁 秀才
 
  Joined: 11 Apr 2008 Posts: 180 Location: 安徽枞阳 田味园隐翁Collection | 
		
		
			
				 Posted: 2008-12-24 12:57:08    Post subject: 哭父篇 长歌 | 
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				两军对峙大江边,弹火纷飞天欲燃。吾曾设馆江洲上,如此风波枕不安。老父从来爱子女,不许儿去冒烽烟。束修一断全家苦,老父忧心夜不眠。年高七十为儿累,亲身去把绛帐悬。父嘱儿时儿送父,单身只影上渡船。此去是凶还是吉,儿于午夜梦魂牵。果然蒋军犹挣扎,残兵败将守江沿。虎狼一见老父面,明晃刺刀对胸前。受尽盘查受惊吓,顿叫疾病把身缠。眼前不见亲生子,孤身异地有谁怜。垂危病里无医药,长辞人世赴黄泉。月前儿把老父送,月后不见返家园。兄弟三人未送老,枉为人子恨绵绵。善者为何遭恶报,捶胸顿足问苍天。长江滚滚波涛吼,芦荻萧萧风雨连。招魂唯向沧州拜,扶榇回乡月不圆。父穷受尽诗书苦,儿读父书一样寒。告知书已归秦火,从此儿孙学种田。今逢五十周年祭,血泪书成哭父篇。 _________________ 不求闻达壑岩栖,苦守田园学赋诗 | 
			 
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		冰清 同进士出身
 
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				 Posted: 2008-12-24 13:43:07    Post subject:  | 
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				感怀触绪,长歌当哭;
 
顿足捶胸,催人泪下。
 
 
问好田园先生! | 
			 
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		qinghongh 榜眼
 
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				 Posted: 2008-12-24 14:11:44    Post subject:  | 
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				| 有杜工部之风。 | 
			 
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		晓松 举人
  
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				 Posted: 2008-12-25 14:40:58    Post subject:  | 
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				真正的长歌当哭. 老先生心可安矣.
 
隐翁兄多保重, 祝节日愉快! | 
			 
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