拈花微笑 秀才
Joined: 21 Jan 2008 Posts: 311
拈花微笑Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 10:20:50 Post subject: 雪语 |
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如同木讷的情人
天空,面容憨厚
正嗑嗑巴巴地吐出他的誓言
羞祛又执拗,一小片一小片飘飞
不一会儿,那窈窕的小松树
出奇地乖顺
眨着修长的睫毛
屏息倾听
越来越柔的耳语 _________________ 瞠目结舌 |
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 12:57:58 Post subject: |
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新的角度. 不錯! _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 13:02:17 Post subject: |
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真可爱的诗,好温柔呀~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 14:49:00 Post subject: 也沦陷 |
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沦陷中 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 18:41:34 Post subject: |
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啊 新鲜 读过后新鲜穿过 我心里 好诗 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 20:07:40 Post subject: |
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好景致,高! _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-05 12:43:24 Post subject: |
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很微笑。睫毛短的女孩会有些难过  |
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拈花微笑 秀才
Joined: 21 Jan 2008 Posts: 311
拈花微笑Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-05 16:38:07 Post subject: |
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问好!谢谢诸位赏光阅读! _________________ 瞠目结舌 |
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