又一方天 秀才

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 385
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Posted: 2008-12-01 16:03:08 Post subject: 《寄 友》 |
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《寄友》
關山千重,纏綿難剪,幾度雲遮回眸?
賞盡阡陌黃塵,簫歇劍收。
雨綻杏蕊欲滴,冷香中、獨守嬌柔。
燕子磯,檻外舟自橫,異鄉風驟!
漫漫旅途未老,過多少、雨亭煙洲,
幾吟三更星醉,月墜西樓!
拼得一硯墨消,題歲月、山嘯水吼。
遙相問、鄉井邊、又添幾樹揚柳? _________________ 空钩久垂
钓得
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2008-12-01 18:09:59 Post subject: |
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箫声剑气铸诗篇。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2008-12-02 06:58:09 Post subject: |
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"遥相问,乡井边,又添几树杨柳?" 思远情浓!
"拼得一砚墨消,题岁月,山啸水吼." 好墨吟啸!
方天挥墨,月醉烟波! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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又一方天 秀才

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 385
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Posted: 2008-12-03 23:14:09 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
箫声剑气铸诗篇。 |
谢谢玉评! _________________ 空钩久垂
钓得
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