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手的树林　

钓月
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Posted: 2008-11-18 05:22:14 Post subject: 手的树林

幼儿园的土最肥 到处是手的树林 老师鼓励举手 说天道酬勤  小手只要一举 就美丽了心情、 必有鸟儿翩翩飞来 叽喳喳唱个不停  愈来愈多试卷 占领了童年心境 小鸟不再来访 一上课，多云转阴  教室里寒风凛冽 手树日渐凋零 只有常绿枝头 栖几只过冬鹞鹰  老师带我们满黑板 捡拾枯叶残英 并大胆吹着牛皮 它们都是黄金白银  08年11月于钓月小筑 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-11-18 06:17:01 Post subject:

过去和现在教育的对比，令人思考~

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Posted: 2008-11-18 18:20:07 Post subject:

质朴, 哲思

钓月
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Posted: 2008-11-19 15:39:07 Post subject:

[quote="半溪明月"]过去和现在教育的对比，令人思考~[/quote] 谢支持！将日常之事诗意化！ _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-11-19 15:40:24 Post subject:

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]质朴, 哲思[/quote] 谢谢白水朋友鼓励！！！ _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-11-25 23:59:15 Post subject:

我的女儿如今功课沉重，我叹息，不知如何？唉～～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-11-26 00:43:24 Post subject:

这种教育，灌输了知识，残害了心灵。让人生最美好的时光，陷于惊恐不安的压力之下。我自己就怕考试。怕怕。。。正好，今天是我学期最后一堂课。给他们的期末考试只占10%，跟一个作业的比重一样。而且还是开卷。而且，今天还把试题给大家过了一遍。哈哈，真希望我是我老师。。。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-11-26 03:52:22 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

这种教育，灌输了知识，残害了心灵。让人生最美好的时光，陷于惊恐不安的压力之下。我自己就怕考试。怕怕。。。
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我也希望在上学的时候遇到你这样的老师~

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Posted: 2008-11-30 01:49:49 Post subject: 答阿依琼裙

[quote="阿依琼裙"]我的女儿如今功课沉重，我叹息，不知如何？唉～～～[/quote] 是啊，一声叹息！我女儿已上大二了！ _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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