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邹崧蔚
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Posted: 2008-12-13 19:07:55 Post subject: 穿行

梦是无数影子的群峰踩冰冷的碧草在乱坟岗穿行急匆匆地而又轻手轻脚每个坟上的几个盗墓者都有猫头鹰的眼睛工具不是钢镐铁锹而是即软又硬的蛇形我不敢打亮手中的电筒也找不到真正的路径我不断吸取繁星的光辉制造成心中的血浆 _________________ 我能说什么呢，我什么也没有说，是他在说。

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-12-14 04:55:40 Post subject:

我不断吸取繁星的光辉制造成心中的血浆我似乎也写过这么恐怖的意境~

邹崧蔚
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Posted: 2008-12-14 19:34:35 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

我不断吸取繁星的光辉
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多谢点评，祝福朋友。
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我能说什么呢，我什么也没有说，是他在说。

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