又一方天 秀才

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 385
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Posted: 2008-11-27 06:07:29 Post subject: 《梅竹缘》【自度】 |
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《梅竹缘》【自度】
*感怀山中梅生丛竹间
2008-11-27 23:20:15
暗香云翠弄幽谷。迷野渡、断轻雾。
疏枝斜倚脉脉护。清柔娇态,淡濯俏骨。魂牵梦深处。
借问谐盟霜几度?瑟风琴雨醉晓暮。
叶里蕊间日月出。三世尘缘,万钟情愫。缠绵惹人妒。 _________________ 空钩久垂
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2008-11-27 08:23:01 Post subject: |
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韵味深幽。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2008-11-27 08:33:31 Post subject: |
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"三世尘缘,万钟情愫".缠绵,消魂,妙!妙!妙! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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又一方天 秀才

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 385
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Posted: 2008-11-28 23:46:37 Post subject: |
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谢谢玉评 _________________ 空钩久垂
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又一方天 秀才

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 385
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Posted: 2008-11-28 23:47:40 Post subject: |
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白云闲人 wrote: |
"三世尘缘,万钟情愫".缠绵,消魂,妙!妙!妙! |
谢谢闲人。握!  _________________ 空钩久垂
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