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留守女人部落(组诗)
东北浩
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Joined: 16 Jan 2008
Posts: 46
Location: 中国黑龙江
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PostPosted: 2008-11-26 13:05:54    Post subject: 留守女人部落(组诗) Reply with quote

留守女人部落(组诗)
文/东北浩(黑龙江)


1、少妇

乳房硬硬的,被外衣裹紧
夜晚,这座山峰有些凉
一缕月光漫过孤独的心境
夜更深时,心绪之水涨潮
青春的火会在肌体中燃烧
瞬间的情绪使周身微痒
幻觉深入体内,渐入高潮
脸的红晕被夜色覆盖
胸脯在鼻孔的翕张中起伏
嘴唇用力咬住棉被一角
像咬着外出男人的耳垂



2、取款

从邮政所取款出来
正好经过镇北的轻工市场
女人放慢脚步,心里一阵痒
乳罩、化妆品、新潮服装
是她几次吞咽的口水
摆摊女的叫卖像磁
试图粘住她脆弱的目光

她使劲按住右侧的上衣口袋
胸中有一面鼓砰砰作响
突然,身后的车铃如一声喊
她在猛然的抖动中停住脚步
仿佛听见了工地上男人的吭哧

于是,她忽地甩开脚步
风一样跑在回家的路上
就像身后有一条狗在追



3、家书

女人拿信的手有些抖
就像捧着一个火球
两年了,日子宽裕了
被窝却总是凉凉的

她不止一次在背地里骂
骂他“死鬼”,骂他陈世美
骂他至祖宗三代

可这次女人哭了
哭他傻,哭他只知赚钱
却忘了自己的老胃病
哭他有情有义的话语
只想着别人,却不顾及自己

哭着,女人又突然笑了
笑出了鼻涕,此时
她两眼直直地看着信纸
却怎么也想不到啊
原来祖国的现代化铁路
还有她的一份功绩



4、心思

男人走后
女人就是梁
撑着这片天

日子就像村前的河水
静静地流着。生活
有时也像落入水面的石子
泛起一圈圈涟漪

诸如那次去镇上赶集
面对那个俊男人的挑逗
女人的心里啊
有一只鸟在扑棱

女人最终没有出格
她背着自己的名声
一路走着,也在盼男人
从年初盼到年尾



东北浩,黑龙江省作家协会会员。
(152000)黑龙江省绥化市委政法委 唐浩
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半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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PostPosted: 2008-11-26 14:50:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

人物情绪刻画的细腻准确,如果能把第三节的大话修改下就更好了~
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