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九月雪,断想
风的声音
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PostPosted: 2008-11-19 18:22:08    Post subject: 九月雪,断想 Reply with quote

因忐忑,步子放的很轻,但沉重
步履艰难,脚起脚落的弧度,像是地球的半径
我不是去面试,不是去约会,更不是去偷情
此时,楼外面下着很大的雪

在遮蔽的视野里,往往会有许多故事发生
例如真实的大雪无痕,例如七个小矮人和白雪公主
乞讨的人蜷缩在一个角落,摄取攒存的一丝温暖
大概也有许多人像我,立于门前,感悟生活,体会生命

苍天永远是一个寂静的观赏者,不近人烟,看淡风火
但只有它才知晓,金字塔的秘密,和是谁覆灭了玛雅帝国
风花雪月不过是昙花一现,真正的爱情又有几人触摸
这雪里,注定要消失一些痕迹,或者,伴随着心,慢慢陷落

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PostPosted: 2008-11-19 21:55:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有心的力量,可以说你的思考很棒


你写到“因忐忑,步子放的很轻,但沉重”

——什么时候不用忐忑,步子就轻而沉,那就更好了~~```

问好你~~~`` 冬天愉快~~``
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